Chronic Pain

by Isaac Weil
Third Prize, Poetry
As I held the waist high fence, looking out over the river valley, light rain pecking at the dried leaves with a sound like a thousand insects, all of their six-thousand little legs crawling, rustling on the dirt, just underneath the sun-tanned skin of the leaves; looking down the softly eroded slope now covered in chlorophyll green grass; over dirt and rocks; over the San Joaquin River; over the water, water that would rush with the coming of heavy rain but at the moment flowed so slowly, had ripples shifting so slightly that its movement seemed like an optical illusion; water divided by a strict linear geometry into shades of grey, mapping the currents below, a division of light and dark beginning in the armpit bend of the river; over oaks on the far bank, wild branches spread close to the ground but with upward growth subdued and slumped, as a man slumps in a room full of people he sees as better than himself; up over the soft mesa forming the other wall of the valley, a flat green plane, providing a flat green horizon line from which the hard grey sky rose; a bird with the oddest call, like the sound Mario makes when he eats a mushroom and grows twice his size, calling across the rain filled sky; thin rain, looking like long sheets of cellophane wrap hanging in the air; the cellophane rain making me zip up my coat; smelling the clinging earth; my mouth wet; I wondered why I felt defeated.

To have a hostile, spreading, clouding pain, in the head, the neck, the chin, the knees, the fingers, the eyelids, the place half way around the torso where so many villains in the movies stick the knife—right behind the ribs—mixed with moments of achievement, intellect, friendship, the pain fundamentally entangled with the moments of life, a creeping sourness in a spoiled yogurt parfait that you’ve been craving for weeks, so that you just keep eating it even though the sourness attacking your tongue is screaming, “Stop! This yogurt’s gone bad;” tonight there will be sweat on your back, burning in your throat, spasms in your stomach as you vomit up the guilty bacteria, and many times the sourness is just too much, you just stop eating but still, even with just a small taste, you know tonight the vomiting will shred your throat. I think I can describe chronic pain best this way.

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